21|公司废弃物:按变化方向分组
本节题目
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
看图读范文 · 图文对照
看着图,读到会写
图与范文同时保留。两侧可分别滚动,关键词标出信息关系。
先看标题、图例、单位和时间,再找关键特征。点击图片可放大;写作时也能随时对照题图。
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.
约 190 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分
先读熟,再遮住回忆。下方的“本题句型”帮助你把表达用到相似题目。
本题句型 · 看到这种关系,怎样起句
时间变化 · 先读本题句,再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息,并调整时态与数量。
01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围
看到题目,先说明图表展示什么。
可用骨架
The chart / table compares… in terms of…
本题原句
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。
02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系
A与B总体减少,C增加;B中途先升后降;终点排名发生变化。
可用骨架
Overall, A increased, whereas B declined over the period shown.
本题原句
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
有时间轴才描述变化。from 是起值,to 是终值,by 是变化量;不必强行把所有线写成相反走势。
03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述
A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。
可用骨架
The figure rose / fell from… to… between… and…
本题原句
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively.
废弃物上升不能用improve;减少的数量用fell by,终点用fell to。
选择与组织 · 为什么这样写
先找关键特征
A与B总体减少,C增加;B中途先升后降;终点排名发生变化。
怎样决定分组
A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。
为什么这样选择
中间年份只在转折处发挥作用,普通年份可以省略;这让每个数字都有解释任务。
语言与精度 · 本节重点
废弃物上升不能用improve;减少的数量用fell by,终点用fell to。
最后练一练 · 先组织,再写
读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。
定点练习
把“B fell to 7 tonnes, from 10 to 3.”改准。
写完后看一种参考处理
Company B's waste output fell by 7 tonnes, from 10 to 3 tonnes.
检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。
换题使用
本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开
自编数据,吨:甲公司2010/2015/2020为10/8/5;乙为6/9/3;丙为2/4/7。写两个关键趋势与一个转折比较。
先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。
打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。
把读到的表达,写成自己的答案
A 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟
留一个复盘:我能回忆哪组表达?换了内容后,哪一句还不熟?下一次先检查这个问题。

