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21|公司废弃物:按变化方向分组 ​

  • A 类 Task 1
  • 第 16/40 课
  • 公司废弃物
  • 建议学习 15–25分钟

本节题目 ​

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

看图读范文 · 图文对照 ​

READ · RECALL · REUSE

看着图,读到会写

图与范文同时保留。两侧可分别滚动,关键词标出信息关系。

TASK FIGURE本题图表

先看标题、图例、单位和时间,再找关键特征。点击图片可放大;写作时也能随时对照题图。

参考范文
01 · 引言交代对象、范围。

The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.

02 · 概述A与B总体减少,C增加;B中途先升后降;终点排名发生变化。

It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.

03 · 细节 1A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。

In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.

04 · 细节 2A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。

From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.

约 190 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分

先读熟,再遮住回忆。下方的“本题句型”帮助你把表达用到相似题目。

图文对照 · 看图读范文
本题图表
三家公司2000–2015年的废弃物产量折线图,单位为吨。
参考范文
01 · 引言交代对象、范围。

The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.

02 · 概述A与B总体减少,C增加;B中途先升后降;终点排名发生变化。

It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.

03 · 细节 1A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。

In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.

04 · 细节 2A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。

From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.

约 190 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分

图表与范文分别滑动;查看大图时,范文仍留在对照区。

本题句型 · 看到这种关系,怎样起句 ​

时间变化 · 先读本题句,再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息,并调整时态与数量。

01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围

看到题目,先说明图表展示什么。

可用骨架

The chart / table compares… in terms of…

本题原句

The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.

对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。

02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系

A与B总体减少,C增加;B中途先升后降;终点排名发生变化。

可用骨架

Overall, A increased, whereas B declined over the period shown.

本题原句

It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.

有时间轴才描述变化。from 是起值,to 是终值,by 是变化量;不必强行把所有线写成相反走势。

03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述

A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。

可用骨架

The figure rose / fell from… to… between… and…

本题原句

In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively.

废弃物上升不能用improve;减少的数量用fell by,终点用fell to。

选择与组织 · 为什么这样写 ​

先找关键特征 ​

A与B总体减少,C增加;B中途先升后降;终点排名发生变化。

怎样决定分组 ​

A与B作为下降组,C作为上升组;用起点、中间转折和终点解释差异。

为什么这样选择 ​

中间年份只在转折处发挥作用,普通年份可以省略;这让每个数字都有解释任务。

语言与精度 · 本节重点 ​

废弃物上升不能用improve;减少的数量用fell by,终点用fell to。

最后练一练 · 先组织,再写 ​

读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。

定点练习 ​

把“B fell to 7 tonnes, from 10 to 3.”改准。

写完后看一种参考处理

Company B's waste output fell by 7 tonnes, from 10 to 3 tonnes.

检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。

换题使用 ​

本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开

自编数据,吨:甲公司2010/2015/2020为10/8/5;乙为6/9/3;丙为2/4/7。写两个关键趋势与一个转折比较。

先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。

打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。

YOUR WRITING

把读到的表达,写成自己的答案

A 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟

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