15｜年龄结构：先看人口分布
- A 类 Task 1
- 第 10/40 课
- 年龄结构
- 建议学习 15–25分钟
本节题目
The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
看图读范文 · 图文对照
看着图，读到会写
图与范文同时保留。两侧可分别滚动，关键词标出信息关系。
先看标题、图例、单位和时间，再找关键特征。点击图片可放大；写作时也能随时对照题图。
读图说明本图未在图片内标明年份，请结合题目中的1984年阅读；左右两侧都是各年龄、性别组占总人口的百分比。
The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.
It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.
In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population. France’s population, by contrast, was more evenly distributed across the age ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all people) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French people were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for India was only 2%.
Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from age 50 upwards. For example, women aged 70 to 75 accounted for almost 3% of the total French population, compared with just under 2% for men in the same age group. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.
约 206 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分
先读熟，再遮住回忆。下方的“本题句型”帮助你把表达用到相似题目。
本题句型 · 看到这种关系，怎样起句
静态比较 · 先读本题句，再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息，并调整时态与数量。
01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围
看到题目，先说明图表展示什么。
可用骨架
The chart / table compares… in terms of…
本题原句
The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.
对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。
02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系
印度年轻人口份额较大；法国老年人口份额较大；法国较高年龄组有明显性别差异。
可用骨架
Overall, A had the largest…, while B…
本题原句
It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.
比较同一指标的类别。静态信息不添加上升下降；先确认数字是数量、占比还是金额。
03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述
先比较年龄分布，再补充性别差异。
可用骨架
The figure for A was higher than that for B, at… and… respectively.
本题原句
In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population.
某年龄组女性占总人口3%，不等于该年龄组只有3%是女性。必须保留百分比的分母。
选择与组织 · 为什么这样写
先找关键特征
印度年轻人口份额较大；法国老年人口份额较大；法国较高年龄组有明显性别差异。
怎样决定分组
先比较年龄分布，再补充性别差异。
为什么这样选择
年龄结构是主线，性别是第二层；不需要描述每一条年龄柱。
语言与精度 · 本节重点
某年龄组女性占总人口3%，不等于该年龄组只有3%是女性。必须保留百分比的分母。
最后练一练 · 先组织，再写
读熟后，可以先遮住参考，回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台，不需要首次学习就完成全文。
定点练习
改写“3% of people aged 70–75 were women”，明确占总人口的比例。
写完后看一种参考处理
Women aged 70 to 75 accounted for almost 3% of the total population.
检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞，但信息需要准确。
换题使用
本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开
自编数据：甲国0–19/20–64/65+人口为35/55/10%；乙国为20/55/25%。只写年龄结构的概述与比较，不凭数据推断生育政策。
先试一段，再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中；原稿留在“初稿”，修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征，书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。
打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘
The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
全文练习至少150词，约20分钟；短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。
把读到的表达，写成自己的答案
A 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟
留一个复盘：我能回忆哪组表达？换了内容后，哪一句还不熟？下一次先检查这个问题。