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54|感谢组织者:具体收益与传播建议 ​

  • G 类 Task 1
  • 第 11/17 课
  • 感谢组织者
  • 建议学习 15–25分钟

本节题目 ​

You recently attended a community workshop on sustainable living organised by your local council. You found the workshop extremely helpful and informative.

Write a letter to the organiser, and:

  • Thank them for organising the workshop.

  • Mention specific aspects of the workshop that you found particularly useful.

  • Suggest how the information could be shared with a wider audience.

Write at least 150 words.

读熟范文,理解选择 ​

REFERENCE MODEL · READ & REUSE

Dear Ms. Thompson,

I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the excellent community workshop on sustainable living held last Saturday. I found the entire event incredibly beneficial and wanted to convey my appreciation for your team's efforts.

The practical demonstrations on composting and rainwater harvesting were particularly insightful. I especially valued the detailed explanations regarding local recycling initiatives, which have already prompted me to make significant changes in my household. The interactive session on reducing energy consumption was also highly engaging and provided actionable steps I can implement immediately.

To extend the reach of this valuable information, I suggest considering a series of short videos highlighting key takeaways, which could be uploaded to the council's website and social media platforms. Additionally, partnering with local schools to conduct similar workshops for students would be an effective way to educate the younger generation.

Thank you once again for organising such a meaningful and impactful event.

Yours sincerely,

Jamie Taylor

约 159 词 · 经本站整理的参考文字 · 用于学习,不代表官方评分

选择与组织 · 为什么这样写 ​

把题目要求拆清楚 ​

感谢活动;指出有帮助的内容;建议怎样扩大受众。

怎样组织段落 ​

感谢与活动定位→具体收获→传播办法。

为什么这样选择 ​

写清学到了什么,让感谢有内容;传播建议必须回应wider audience。

语言与精度 · 本节重点 ​

suggest后可接-ing或that从句,不能直接suggest somebody to do。

最后练一练 · 先组织,再写 ​

读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。

定点练习 ​

纠正“I suggest you to upload videos.”

写完后看一种参考处理

I suggest uploading short videos to the council's website.

检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。

换题使用 ​

本站自编迁移题

自编迁移:参加急救工作坊后感谢组织者,说明一个学到的技能并建议在线分享材料。

先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。

打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘

You recently attended a community workshop on sustainable living organised by your local council. You found the workshop extremely helpful and informative.

Write a letter to the organiser, and:

  • Thank them for organising the workshop.

  • Mention specific aspects of the workshop that you found particularly useful.

  • Suggest how the information could be shared with a wider audience.

Write at least 150 words.

全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。

YOUR WRITING

把读到的表达,写成自己的答案

G 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟

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留一个复盘:我能回忆哪组表达?换了内容后,哪一句还不熟?下一次先检查这个问题。