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19|独居家庭:画像与住房分开处理 ​

  • A 类 Task 1
  • 第 14/40 课
  • 独居家庭
  • 建议学习 15–25分钟

本节题目 ​

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

看图读范文 · 图文对照 ​

READ · RECALL · REUSE

看着图,读到会写

图与范文同时保留。两侧可分别滚动,关键词标出信息关系。

TASK FIGURE本题图表

先看标题、图例、单位和时间,再找关键特征。点击图片可放大;写作时也能随时对照题图。

参考范文
01 · 引言交代对象、范围。

The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.

02 · 概述高龄独居群体中女性占比突出;较年轻组男性较多;两卧室住房最常见。

Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.

03 · 细节 1年龄性别图一段,卧室结构图一段;概述同时提两张图的关键发现。

A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.

04 · 细节 2年龄性别图一段,卧室结构图一段;概述同时提两张图的关键发现。

In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.

约 184 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分

先读熟,再遮住回忆。下方的“本题句型”帮助你把表达用到相似题目。

图文对照 · 看图读范文
本题图表
英国2011年独居者年龄性别比例条形图与独居家庭卧室数量饼图。
参考范文
01 · 引言交代对象、范围。

The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.

02 · 概述高龄独居群体中女性占比突出;较年轻组男性较多;两卧室住房最常见。

Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.

03 · 细节 1年龄性别图一段,卧室结构图一段;概述同时提两张图的关键发现。

A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.

04 · 细节 2年龄性别图一段,卧室结构图一段;概述同时提两张图的关键发现。

In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.

约 184 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分

图表与范文分别滑动;查看大图时,范文仍留在对照区。

本题句型 · 看到这种关系,怎样起句 ​

多指标与组合信息 · 先读本题句,再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息,并调整时态与数量。

01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围

看到题目,先说明图表展示什么。

可用骨架

The chart / table compares… in terms of…

本题原句

The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011.

对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。

02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系

高龄独居群体中女性占比突出;较年轻组男性较多;两卧室住房最常见。

可用骨架

Overall, … . In terms of…, … .

本题原句

The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.

各指标先分别概括,再比较同单位的信息。金额与人数可比较走势,不能直接比较数值大小。

03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述

年龄性别图一段,卧室结构图一段;概述同时提两张图的关键发现。

可用骨架

While A…, B… . / The figure for… stood at…

本题原句

Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories.

35.4%是最常见类别,但不是多数;majority通常要求超过一半。

选择与组织 · 为什么这样写 ​

先找关键特征 ​

高龄独居群体中女性占比突出;较年轻组男性较多;两卧室住房最常见。

怎样决定分组 ​

年龄性别图一段,卧室结构图一段;概述同时提两张图的关键发现。

为什么这样选择 ​

两图的统计对象和维度不同,可以分别描述;不推断某个年龄组一定住某种户型。

语言与精度 · 本节重点 ​

35.4%是最常见类别,但不是多数;majority通常要求超过一半。

最后练一练 · 先组织,再写 ​

读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。

定点练习 ​

把“A majority lived in two-bedroom homes, at 35.4%.”改准。

写完后看一种参考处理

Two-bedroom homes were the most common category, accounting for 35.4%.

检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。

换题使用 ​

本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开

自编数据:独居者30–49岁中男性60%、65+中女性70%;一/二/三卧室户型占30/45/25%。写覆盖两组信息的概述,不把它们强行匹配。

先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。

打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。

YOUR WRITING

把读到的表达,写成自己的答案

A 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟

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