29|公平贸易:两类产品的不同变化
本节题目
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
看图读范文 · 图文对照
看着图,读到会写
图与范文同时保留。两侧可分别滚动,关键词标出信息关系。
先看标题、图例、单位和时间,再找关键特征。点击图片可放大;写作时也能随时对照题图。
The tables show the amount of money spent on Fairtrade coffee and bananas in two separate years in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It is clear that sales of Fairtrade coffee rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales of Fairtrade bananas only went up in three out of the five countries. Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products.
In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at €3 million, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in the UK, at €15 million. By 2004, however, sales of Fairtrade coffee in the UK had risen to €20 million, and this was over three times higher than Switzerland’s sales figure for Fairtrade coffee in that year. The year 2004 also saw dramatic increases in the money spent on Fairtrade bananas in the UK and Switzerland, with revenues rising by €32 million and €4.5 million respectively.
Sales of the two Fairtrade products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in sales of Fairtrade coffee can be seen, but revenue remained at €2 million or below in all three countries in both years. Finally, it is noticeable that the money spent on Fairtrade bananas actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.
约 217 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分
先读熟,再遮住回忆。下方的“本题句型”帮助你把表达用到相似题目。
本题句型 · 看到这种关系,怎样起句
时间变化 · 先读本题句,再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息,并调整时态与数量。
01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围
看到题目,先说明图表展示什么。
可用骨架
The chart / table compares… in terms of…
本题原句
The tables show the amount of money spent on Fairtrade coffee and bananas in two separate years in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。
02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系
咖啡在五国均增长;香蕉只有部分国家增长;大市场与小市场变化幅度不同。
可用骨架
Overall, A increased, whereas B declined over the period shown.
本题原句
It is clear that sales of Fairtrade coffee rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales of Fairtrade bananas only went up in three out of the five countries. Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products.
有时间轴才描述变化。from 是起值,to 是终值,by 是变化量;不必强行把所有线写成相反走势。
03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述
按产品分段,分别写共同增长与增长下降并存。
可用骨架
The figure rose / fell from… to… between… and…
本题原句
In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at €3 million, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in the UK, at €15 million.
sales这里以货币计量,不是吨数;当前图中香蕉UK为15→47、Switzerland为1→5.5百万欧元,注意逐行匹配产品、国家和年份。
选择与组织 · 为什么这样写
先找关键特征
咖啡在五国均增长;香蕉只有部分国家增长;大市场与小市场变化幅度不同。
怎样决定分组
按产品分段,分别写共同增长与增长下降并存。
为什么这样选择
两类商品的变化方向不同,按国家逐一写会隐藏这一主线。
语言与精度 · 本节重点
sales这里以货币计量,不是吨数;当前图中香蕉UK为15→47、Switzerland为1→5.5百万欧元,注意逐行匹配产品、国家和年份。
最后练一练 · 先组织,再写
读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。
定点练习
把“20 million tonnes of coffee were sold.”改成金额描述。
写完后看一种参考处理
Revenue from Fairtrade coffee reached €20 million.
检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。
换题使用
本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开
自编数据,百万欧元:甲国咖啡1→5、香蕉4→8;乙国咖啡2→4、香蕉3→2;丙国咖啡1→2、香蕉2→1。分别为两种产品写概述。
先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。
打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。
把读到的表达,写成自己的答案
A 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟
留一个复盘:我能回忆哪组表达?换了内容后,哪一句还不熟?下一次先检查这个问题。

