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30|国家废弃物:缺失数据与异常变化 ​

  • A 类 Task 1
  • 第 25/40 课
  • 国家废弃物
  • 建议学习 15–25分钟

本节题目 ​

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

看图读范文 · 图文对照 ​

READ · RECALL · REUSE

看着图,读到会写

图与范文同时保留。两侧可分别滚动,关键词标出信息关系。

TASK FIGURE本题图表

先看标题、图例、单位和时间,再找关键特征。点击图片可放大;写作时也能随时对照题图。

参考范文
01 · 引言交代对象、范围。

The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000.

02 · 概述美国记录的废物最多;多数国家增加;韩国在已有的后两期数据中减少。

The US recorded the largest waste output in all three years shown. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.

03 · 细节 1先处理总体增长组,再写增长幅度特别大的国家与下降例外。

Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.

04 · 细节 2先处理总体增长组,再写增长幅度特别大的国家与下降例外。

The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.

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先读熟,再遮住回忆。下方的“本题句型”帮助你把表达用到相似题目。

图文对照 · 看图读范文
本题图表
六国1980、1990和2000年废弃物产量表格,星号表示数据缺失。
参考范文
01 · 引言交代对象、范围。

The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000.

02 · 概述美国记录的废物最多;多数国家增加;韩国在已有的后两期数据中减少。

The US recorded the largest waste output in all three years shown. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.

03 · 细节 1先处理总体增长组,再写增长幅度特别大的国家与下降例外。

Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.

04 · 细节 2先处理总体增长组,再写增长幅度特别大的国家与下降例外。

The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.

约 161 词 · 经本站整理的学习参考 · 不代表官方评分

图表与范文分别滑动;查看大图时,范文仍留在对照区。

本题句型 · 看到这种关系,怎样起句 ​

时间变化 · 先读本题句,再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息,并调整时态与数量。

01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围

看到题目,先说明图表展示什么。

可用骨架

The chart / table compares… in terms of…

本题原句

The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000.

对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。

02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系

美国记录的废物最多;多数国家增加;韩国在已有的后两期数据中减少。

可用骨架

Overall, A increased, whereas B declined over the period shown.

本题原句

The US recorded the largest waste output in all three years shown. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.

有时间轴才描述变化。from 是起值,to 是终值,by 是变化量;不必强行把所有线写成相反走势。

03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述

先处理总体增长组,再写增长幅度特别大的国家与下降例外。

可用骨架

The figure rose / fell from… to… between… and…

本题原句

Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal.

有些国家早年没有数据,不能把未提供值当零或做完整合计。

选择与组织 · 为什么这样写 ​

先找关键特征 ​

美国记录的废物最多;多数国家增加;韩国在已有的后两期数据中减少。

怎样决定分组 ​

先处理总体增长组,再写增长幅度特别大的国家与下降例外。

为什么这样选择 ​

缺失年份不参与完整趋势断言;异常方向是概述的重要信息。

语言与精度 · 本节重点 ​

有些国家早年没有数据,不能把未提供值当零或做完整合计。

最后练一练 · 先组织,再写 ​

读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。

定点练习 ​

纠正“Korea fell throughout 1980–2000”,早年数据缺失。

写完后看一种参考处理

Korea's waste output declined between the two years for which figures are provided.

检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。

换题使用 ​

本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开

自编数据,百万吨:甲国2000/2010/2020为100/140/160;乙国为未提供/20/12;丙国为2/4/8。写概述并准确限定乙国趋势范围。

先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。

打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。

YOUR WRITING

把读到的表达,写成自己的答案

A 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟

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