48｜祝贺朋友：真诚比堆砌赞美更重要
本节题目
Your close friend, Sarah, has recently won a prestigious national award for her innovative work in environmental conservation. You were unable to attend the award ceremony.
Write a letter to Sarah. In your letter:
Congratulate her on her achievement.
Mention how you learned about the award.
Express your feelings and explain why her work is important.
Write at least 150 words.
读熟范文，理解选择
REFERENCE MODEL · READ & REUSE
Dear Sarah,
I was so happy to read about your national award in Eco Solutions Monthly yesterday. Congratulations! The article explained how your urban reforestation project is helping bring more green space into the city, and I immediately thought of all the time you have put into it.
I still remember you talking about the project when it was just an idea. You were determined to make it work, even when finding support was difficult. It is lovely to see that effort recognised. Your work matters because it shows that protecting the environment can start with practical changes in the places where people live.
I am sorry I could not make it to the ceremony. I would have loved to cheer you on in person, but I had a family commitment that evening. Could we meet for dinner next weekend? I would like to hear how the night went and celebrate with you properly.
Best wishes,
Jamie Taylor
约 158 词 · 经本站整理的参考文字 · 用于学习，不代表官方评分
选择与组织 · 为什么这样写
把题目要求拆清楚
祝贺成就；交代消息来源；说明你的感受与事情的重要性。
怎样组织段落
消息与祝贺→具体努力和影响→个人回应。
为什么这样选择
一个你记得的细节能支撑喜悦，避免通篇groundbreaking、remarkable等抽象赞美。
语言与精度 · 本节重点
informal不意味着随意省略任务；重要性用具体效果解释。
最后练一练 · 先组织，再写
读熟后，可以先遮住参考，回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台，不需要首次学习就完成全文。
定点练习
把“Your work is amazing and important.”写具体。
写完后看一种参考处理
Your project shows how small changes to city spaces can make neighbourhoods greener.
检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞，但信息需要准确。
换题使用
本站自编迁移题
自编迁移：朋友获得教学奖，你从学校网站得知；写祝贺、一个教学细节及你为何替他高兴。
先试一段，再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中；原稿留在“初稿”，修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征，书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。
打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘
Your close friend, Sarah, has recently won a prestigious national award for her innovative work in environmental conservation. You were unable to attend the award ceremony.
Write a letter to Sarah. In your letter:
Congratulate her on her achievement.
Mention how you learned about the award.
Express your feelings and explain why her work is important.
Write at least 150 words.
全文练习至少150词，约20分钟；短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。
把读到的表达，写成自己的答案
G 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟
留一个复盘：我能回忆哪组表达？换了内容后，哪一句还不熟？下一次先检查这个问题。