50|对朋友道歉:承担责任并提出补救
本节题目
You recently promised your friend, Sarah, that you would help her move house last Saturday. However, you completely forgot and didn't show up.
Write a letter to Sarah. In your letter, you should:
Apologise for not helping.
Explain why you forgot.
Suggest how you can make it up to her.
Write at least 150 words.
读熟范文,理解选择
REFERENCE MODEL · READ & REUSE
Hi Sarah,
I'm writing to express my deepest apologies for completely missing your house move last Saturday. I feel absolutely terrible that I wasn't there to help, especially after promising I would be. There's no excuse for my forgetfulness, and I understand if you're really upset.
The reason I didn't show up is that I had completely lost track of time. My cousin unexpectedly arrived from abroad, and we ended up spending the entire day catching up. In my excitement, I completely forgot about my commitment to you. I know this doesn't justify my actions, but I wanted to be honest about what happened.
I feel awful about letting you down, and I'd really like to make it up to you. Would you let me help you unpack and organise your new place this coming weekend? Or, if you'd prefer, I could treat you to dinner at your favourite restaurant as a way of saying sorry. Please let me know what works for you. I value our friendship and hope you can forgive me.
Again, I'm truly sorry.
Best,
Jamie Taylor
约 182 词 · 经本站整理的参考文字 · 用于学习,不代表官方评分
选择与组织 · 为什么这样写
把题目要求拆清楚
失约帮助搬家;说明原因;提出可行的替代帮助。
怎样组织段落
先道歉→简短原因→具体补救。
为什么这样选择
补救要真正弥补失约,不能只有反复sorry;原因不是推卸责任。
语言与精度 · 本节重点
过去未能履约用could not;新承诺说明时间与动作。
最后练一练 · 先组织,再写
读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。
定点练习
把“I will help you another time.”写成可执行承诺。
写完后看一种参考处理
I can come over on Sunday morning to help unpack the boxes and put the furniture together.
检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。
换题使用
本站自编迁移题
自编迁移:你未能接朋友到站,说明原因并提供当天可实施的补救;先写道歉和补救。
先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。
打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘
You recently promised your friend, Sarah, that you would help her move house last Saturday. However, you completely forgot and didn't show up.
Write a letter to Sarah. In your letter, you should:
Apologise for not helping.
Explain why you forgot.
Suggest how you can make it up to her.
Write at least 150 words.
全文练习至少150词,约20分钟;短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。
把读到的表达,写成自己的答案
G 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟
留一个复盘:我能回忆哪组表达?换了内容后,哪一句还不熟?下一次先检查这个问题。

