45｜向朋友讲旅行：叙事也要完成任务
本节题目
You recently went on a memorable trip with a group of friends. Write a letter to a friend who couldn't join you. In your letter:
Describe the trip and where you went.
Explain what you did and enjoyed most.
Invite your friend to join you on a similar trip in the future.
Write at least 150 words.
读熟范文，理解选择
REFERENCE MODEL · READ & REUSE
Dear Sarah,
I'm writing to tell you all about our incredible trip to the Scottish Highlands! We spent a week exploring the breathtaking landscapes, and I missed you so much. We rented a cosy cottage near Loch Ness, and every morning, we woke up to stunning views of the mountains.
We spent our days hiking through the glens, visiting historic castles, and even took a boat trip on the loch. The highlight for me was the day we hiked to the top of Ben Nevis; the panoramic views were simply unforgettable. We also enjoyed evenings by the fireplace, sharing stories and laughter.
I know how much you love nature and adventure, and I truly wish you could have been there. The atmosphere was magical. I'm already planning another trip, perhaps to the Isle of Skye next time. Please, you absolutely have to join us! It wouldn't be the same without you. Let me know if you are interested, and we can start planning.
Warmly,
Emily.
约 165 词 · 经本站整理的参考文字 · 用于学习，不代表官方评分
选择与组织 · 为什么这样写
把题目要求拆清楚
收信人是没能同行的朋友；要讲行程、难忘经历与下一次安排。
怎样组织段落
先分享旅行，再突出一个记忆，最后连接下一次见面。
为什么这样选择
挑一个具体场景比列出全部景点更能回应memorable；下一次计划不要挤掉本次经历。
语言与精度 · 本节重点
自然的朋友语气；过去经历用过去时，邀请用would或未来安排。
最后练一练 · 先组织，再写
读熟后，可以先遮住参考，回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台，不需要首次学习就完成全文。
定点练习
写一句从回忆过渡到再次邀请的话。
写完后看一种参考处理
I wish you could have joined us, and I hope we can plan another trip together soon.
检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞，但信息需要准确。
换题使用
本站自编迁移题
自编迁移：给错过郊游的朋友写信，介绍地点、一个有趣事件并建议下次同行；先写事件段。
先试一段，再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中；原稿留在“初稿”，修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征，书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。
打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘
You recently went on a memorable trip with a group of friends. Write a letter to a friend who couldn't join you. In your letter:
Describe the trip and where you went.
Explain what you did and enjoyed most.
Invite your friend to join you on a similar trip in the future.
Write at least 150 words.
全文练习至少150词，约20分钟；短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。
把读到的表达，写成自己的答案
G 类 Task 1 · 全文练习至少 150 词 · 建议 20 分钟
留一个复盘：我能回忆哪组表达？换了内容后，哪一句还不熟？下一次先检查这个问题。