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73|独立与依赖:明确讨论的维度 ​

  • Task 2
  • 第 16/27 课
  • 独立与依赖
  • 建议学习 25–35分钟

本节题目 ​

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

读熟范文,理解选择 ​

MODEL RESPONSE参考回答 · 读到会写约 329 词 · 学习参考,不代表官方评分
全文 · 听与跟读
跟读英美口音朗读
句型 / 连接词汇 / 搭配点选一句,用蓝色英音或红色美音跟读;再换题写出来。

01 · 引言|承认互赖,判断总体更独立

People hold differing opinions on whether modern society fosters greater dependence on one another or increased independence. In my view, while some aspects of contemporary life encourage interdependence, modern developments have ultimately made people more self-reliant than in the past.

02 · 主体一|解释仍然需要帮助的领域

On one hand, it is undeniable that certain aspects of modern life necessitate greater reliance on others. One key factor is the increasing complexity of life, particularly in financial matters. The soaring cost of living, especially in urban areas, often compels young adults to seek financial assistance from their families. For instance, rising property prices make it difficult for first-time buyers to afford a home without parental support for the initial deposit. Additionally, the pursuit of a higher standard of living means that both parents in many households work full-time, making them reliant on external childcare, such as grandparents or professional babysitters. These realities suggest that modern society reinforces dependence in some ways.

03 · 主体二|解释独立如何增加

However, I support the view that people today are more independent than ever before. One reason for this is the shift in family dynamics. In many countries, families have become smaller and more geographically dispersed, reducing the extent to which individuals can rely on relatives for support. Furthermore, globalization and technological advancements have enabled people to move away from their hometowns in pursuit of education and career opportunities. For example, an increasing number of students choose to study abroad rather than attend a local university, an experience that fosters self-sufficiency as they learn to manage daily life independently. Another crucial factor is the impact of technology, which has revolutionized how people work and communicate. Remote work and digital tools now allow individuals to work independently from anywhere in the world, further reinforcing self-reliance.

04 · 结论|区分局部依赖与整体判断

In conclusion, while modern life has created some forms of dependence, particularly in financial and childcare aspects, the overall trend points toward greater independence. Smaller family structures, global mobility, and technological advancements have empowered individuals to navigate life with less reliance on others.

17 句 · 按意群阅读,保留段落主线

选择与组织 · 为什么这样写 ​

把题目要求拆清楚 ​

讨论现代人更独立还是更依赖;两者可在不同生活维度同时出现。

怎样组织段落 ​

财务与照护依赖→生活技能、迁居与选择自主→说明你的整体判断。

为什么这样选择 ​

说明独立是哪一种,否则远程工作未必能证明不依赖社会系统。

语言与精度 · 本节重点 ​

financial independence、self-reliance与interdependence不可随意互换。

最后练一练 · 先组织,再写 ​

读熟后,可以先遮住参考,回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台,不需要首次学习就完成全文。

定点练习 ​

为“Technology makes us independent.”增加具体对象与机制。

写完后看一种参考处理

Digital tools allow some people to work away from their hometowns, giving them greater control over where they live.

检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞,但信息需要准确。

换题使用 ​

本站自编迁移题

自编题:Do smartphones make people more self-reliant or more dependent on others? 分别限定一个维度,再写自己的判断。

先试一段,再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中;原稿留在“初稿”,修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征,书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。

打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

全文练习至少250词,约40分钟;本节短练可以先写一个主体段。

YOUR WRITING

把读到的表达,写成自己的答案

Task 2 · 全文练习至少 250 词 · 建议 40 分钟

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